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Mark Sundstrom's avatar

Okay, that was a fun story, did not see where that was going. Thank you.

A grammar note (I can't help it) -- "she mostly painted still lives..." just didn't sound right to me -- I think it should be "painted still lifes".

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Elizabeth Sowden's avatar

Thank you! I’ll check the AP style book and see what it says. 😉

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Nici's avatar

You excel at character development. I could see them so clearly in my minds eye. I loved it. Thank you.

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Elizabeth Sowden's avatar

Thank you so much, Nici!

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Penfist's avatar

"You want the money, you just don't want me."

I wonder how many billions of times that has been said in human history?

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David Swindle 🟦's avatar

Bravo! This was excellent, Elizabeth. You’re a wonderful writer! Keep going!

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Elizabeth Sowden's avatar

Thank you so much, David. :)

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